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    9th of June 2015

    JustNoPoint

    The balloon order is incorrect in panel 3. The responses from Arik are taking place after she responds.

    "We'll I'm Bothare" should have been below "Why wouldn't I?"

    Nice art and dialogue!

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    12th of June 2015

    otterkit

    Do'h! Why I didn't see that I don't know....thanks for the gentle reminder!

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