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Leaving The Party
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view Tantz Aerine's profile

25th of October 2016

Tantz Aerine

He did the right thing if I understood it right that he ran off.

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view otterkit's profile

25th of October 2016

otterkit

Haha guess I still need to work on the clarity of my fight scenes :D Yep, about half way through the fight Arik kind of gave up on 'I'm going to take you down' for 'oh shit I can't beat this guy alone, TIME TO RUN!'

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view HiFranc's profile

25th of October 2016

HiFranc

Am I right in thinking that, when he broke through the window, the spell that stopped her sensing him was broken?

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view otterkit's profile

25th of October 2016

otterkit

You'll get more details very soon on what was blocking them but yes, breaking the window did the trick! Now the question is what going through broken glass and falling several stories is going to do to a kitik....it may not be pretty.

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9th of January 2017

Stig Hemmer

With all the talk of electricity, I am betting there is a Faraday cage surrounding the house or the room.

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9th of January 2017

otterkit

Close, but not quite ;) By the way, welcome to the story!

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29th of October 2016

Marscaleb

The use of colors between them is a nice touch!

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1st of November 2016

otterkit

Thanks! We originally planned to have a shape shifting battle, but that was visually very confusing last time.

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