Leaving The Party
rate this page: X X X X X
average rating: 5
  • post a comment
    user comments
    view Tantz Aerine's profile

    25th of October 2016

    Tantz Aerine

    He did the right thing if I understood it right that he ran off.

    end of message
    view otterkit's profile

    25th of October 2016

    otterkit

    Haha guess I still need to work on the clarity of my fight scenes :D Yep, about half way through the fight Arik kind of gave up on 'I'm going to take you down' for 'oh shit I can't beat this guy alone, TIME TO RUN!'

    end of message
    view HiFranc's profile

    25th of October 2016

    HiFranc

    Am I right in thinking that, when he broke through the window, the spell that stopped her sensing him was broken?

    end of message
    view otterkit's profile

    25th of October 2016

    otterkit

    You'll get more details very soon on what was blocking them but yes, breaking the window did the trick! Now the question is what going through broken glass and falling several stories is going to do to a kitik....it may not be pretty.

    end of message

    9th of January 2017

    Stig Hemmer

    With all the talk of electricity, I am betting there is a Faraday cage surrounding the house or the room.

    end of message
    view otterkit's profile

    9th of January 2017

    otterkit

    Close, but not quite ;) By the way, welcome to the story!

    end of message

    29th of October 2016

    Marscaleb

    The use of colors between them is a nice touch!

    end of message
    view otterkit's profile

    1st of November 2016

    otterkit

    Thanks! We originally planned to have a shape shifting battle, but that was visually very confusing last time.

    end of message