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19th of August 2015

Andy P.

Although I'm not one who generally enjoys seeing a lot of dialing on a page, this is wonderful. You tell him, Baxt!

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view otterkit's profile

19th of August 2015

otterkit

Yeeeah I've yet to manage to cut down the dialogue blocks for important scenes, but this is one of those conversations that had to happen :D
By the way, in about six weeks Part 2 will begin, and then there'll be a lot less talk and a LOT more action. Not to mention, blood ;)

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view HiFranc's profile

19th of August 2015

HiFranc

I wonder how Arik would feel after he has had time to think about what she said.

{edited above as mistyped}

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view otterkit's profile

19th of August 2015

otterkit

Possibly a little foolish ;)

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view Tantz Aerine's profile

19th of August 2015

Tantz Aerine

That's a very valid point! I do think though that Arik wouldn't be entertaining this discussion had he not already been head over heels for her. He's lucky for that.

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21st of August 2015

Marscaleb

They lost two days of work, but stole enough wine to pay for seven.

That's not balance.

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21st of August 2015

otterkit

Wasn't just the days of work they lost, now was it? Even our system of justice has come around to the idea that trauma other than physical is still trauma, and that the guy who did the damage has to pay the hospital bills ;)

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28th of August 2015

Marscaleb

But she already accounted for that with the other bottles.

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